Friday 13 August 2021

The Belated Return to Swanwick

 

It's that time of year again; my annual visit to the Swanwick Writers' Summer School, just delayed by a year thanks to some pandemic which probably has a personality that's even more unbearable than that of the Epideme virus in Red Dwarf. After the isolation of the last eighteen months, I was so glad to be back. Swanwick is normally my big summer social, and last year's cancellation hit me pretty hard, with the week when it was going to take place spent at home drinking. Anyway, with that cheeriness out of the way, let's talk about the week. With some apprehension which later passed as the week went on, I was once again able to head to the picturesque Derbyshire surroundings of the Hayes Conference Centre. With that in mind, let me share this year's cavalcade of take-homes and anecdotes.

A Milestone

This has been my fifth visit to Swanwick, and one big first for me was that I actually had something published which I could sell in The Book Room, thanks to the publication project in one of my third year university modules. I took advantage of a discount I had with a printing service to produce a batch of copies of my pirate novelette, Gentlemen of Fortune, specially for Swanwick. Granted, there'd been a little bit of a misadventure on the first night when I'd forgotten to fill in the paperwork for the book room, having arrived later than most after the coach had been delayed. While I was wrangling that, the Book Room closed while everyone was attending the chairperson's welcome. Then I was told I'd forgotten to put price tags in the books. However, I got that sorted out quickly, by which time the queue at the bar had died down. As the week went on, people were coming to me with the copies that they'd bought, asking me to sign them. It felt great, and by the end of the week I'd sold two thirds of my stock.

Not only did I have a book out, but I also ran a course this year. On Tuesday, commonly known as the "procrastination-free day", I ran an hour-long workshop on Character Motivations. This was an attempt to apply Shalom H. Schwartz's "Theory of Basic Human Values" to characters in fiction, and was originally written in my first year. It was thin on the ground - partly due to clashes with other courses such as Val Penny's workshop on Writing Suspense, which I would have gone to myself if I hadn't been teaching this one -  but that made things a little more comfortable for me, teaching to a smaller group. I probably could have explained some parts a little better, and maybe should have used some well-known examples, perhaps from the same work if possible. But some people did come up to me and say they enjoyed it, and those who weren't able to attend for one reason or another told me they'd heard good things. All in all, not bad for my first attempt at teaching a course.

Specialist Courses

As always, courses at Swanwick are divided into three categories: Specialist Courses, which comprise four hour-long sessions spread across the week; Short Courses, which comprise two sessions which take place on the same day, with lunch in-between; and Workshops, which comprise a single session.

My chosen specialist course this year was on Writing Historical Fiction, presented by Michael Jecks. I consider historical fiction to be one of my main genres, but with a rather pulpy tone. I suppose I'd call my work "action/adventure", but taking place in historical settings. I have used actual historical figures in some projects, but it's not always easy to get a feel of the characters of the individuals in question. The course looked at pointers for historical research, along with common pitfalls. He also discussed the markets and returns for the author in publishing. There was even a session in which he talked about how he drew influence from people from his past as inspiration for some characters. Even though my stories take place in the past, I sometimes draw influence from aspects of my own life. I quite like using the historical settings to distance myself from those events, especially those that can be painful for me.

Unfortunately, the last session was complicated by an incident that morning, in which an apparent bird strike on a transformer had resulted in a village-wide power cut. With a cold breakfast and a limited supply of coffee, I was sat in the dark conference hall wondering if the power would be back on before the morning break since none of the hot drink dispensers were functioning. Thankfully, the lights came back on midway through the session, and a disaster was averted.

Short Courses

There was a great array of short courses this year, often marred by the fact that there's always going to be two interesting ones happening on the same day.

Sunday's short course was on Show-Stopping Story Writing, hosted by Bettina von Cossel. I'm definitely one of those writers who falls into the "Show, don't tell" school of thought. As I mainly write shorter fiction, I find that I prefer to show, as it paints a more vivid picture. This course was all about that, through use of body language to convey characters' emotions (even getting asked to share a crib sheet I'd shared before), and the use of the senses to help establish settings. There was a fantastic exercise in which we were asked to put a character in a circus, thinking about what atmosphere would be provided by the setting, and perhaps showing the protagonist in the setting to establish their character. It had made me think about the visual storytelling in Who Framed Roger Rabbit, and how that kind of thing could be done in prose.

On Monday, I settled on Full Time Writers in the Gig Economy, with Anita Belli and Gerald Hornsby. After all, I've finished university and have moved out of my parents' house now. I'm going to need to find ways to earn a living through writing while adopting a bohemian lifestyle to compensate for losing out on the student experience thanks to this pandemic. The course discussed different types of publishing, along with ghostwriting (which I landed my first job in last month), editing and proofreading, and teaching. I'm certainly leaving my options open.

On Wednesday, I looked at Creating a Series with Diana Kimpton. I chose this one because I intended to make more stories featuring the adventures of Kestrel and Scar, both before and after the events of Gentlemen of Fortune. I'm definitely looking at doing them as a freestanding series, making each story self-contained. The course also looked at how to publish and market a series. There was even one exercise in which Diana asked the class to mind-map a series from one prompt. When she chose pirates, I noticed a few eyes turning towards me.

Thursday involved a visit to Simon Hall's Character Clarifier. I've attended previous courses on characters run by Simon Hall, and this one was familiar yet fresh. The workshop looked at ways to establish a character through their appearance and mannerisms, and writing scenes which involved them interacting with others through a date, a minor mishap (a waiter spilling a drink on them), and a more serious incident (a fire at the location of the date). Unfortunately, I was only able to attend the first session, because I needed to leave the afternoon free to write before the Annual General Meeting.

Evening Events


Swanwick had its usual array of evening events, including a "Birds of a Feather" event on the first night in which you could meet up with authors who wrote in the same genre as you and exchange advice or bounce ideas.

Unfortunately, I missed out on a fair bit this year. For example, I had to dedicate time to evening writing sessions to meet an upcoming deadline on a ghostwriting project. Other times, there were two events which I was interested in which took place at the same time. Case and point, the Monday night Poetry Open Mic and the General Knowledge Quiz. I was interested in both, but ultimately chose the quiz. Didn't win though.

Of course, there's always the fancy dress disco, with this year's theme being Roaring Twenties. I donned a Peaky Blinders-style flat cap with my trademark brown suit which miraculously still fits despite the lockdown kummerspeck, and even had my hair cut before heading out. It was a lot of fun, and the point in the week when a lot of people had been able to lighten up. I even ended up judging the best fancy dress costumes. My Charleston probably needs work though.

Of course, there's also the dregs party on the final night. I spent a portion of the night on the lawn by the new fire pits, and even lay back and watched the stars at one point.

I've truly missed being at Swanwick while this pandemic's been raging. I'd heard warnings that if it didn't go ahead this year, it wouldn't be going ahead at all. I love Swanwick, and I wanted to keep that ship sailing, so I decided to successfully run for next year's Committee. I'm looking forward to Swanwick 2022.

Happy writing.

I've missed you too.


Saturday 7 August 2021

Book Review: The Shetland Sea Murders by Marsali Taylor

 

I've been reading a lot of murder mysteries lately. Today I'm looking at The Shetland Sea Murders by Marsali Taylor. this post is part of a Reading Between the Lines blog tour organised by Lynsey Adams.

Blurb

Marsali Taylor returns with the ninth gripping mystery in her Shetland Sailing Mystery series.

While onboard her last chartered sailing trip of the season, Cass Lynch is awoken in the middle of the night by a Mayday call to the Shetland coastguard. A fishing vessel has become trapped on the rocks off the coast of one of the islands.

In the days that follow, there's both a shocking murder and a baffling death. On the surface there's no link, but when Cass becomes involved it is soon clear that her life is also in danger.

Convinced that someone sinister is at work in these Shetland waters, Cass is determined to find and stop them. But uncovering the truth could prove to be deadly...

Review

With this being the ninth book in the series, I was concerned that there may have been a lot of past events to catch up on. Fortunately, this story seemed self-contained enough that I didn't pick up on anything of that sort.

The story provides plenty of layers of intrigue and drama, with Cass finding herself embroiled in a family matter on the trip she's serving on; the sailing trip is for the birthday of a man named Stevie, but one of his nieces wants him to face justice for historic child abuse, while his other niece wants to cover it up. On top of that, a man named Paul Roberts (no relation) is visiting the community, but most of the locals are wary of him. It's a slow burning plot, but it certainly thickens as it goes on.

I must admit that I did struggle with a lot of the Shetland dialect in the story. While it does help ground the setting, it can be difficult to follow at times. Fortunately, there is a glossary at the end of the book, but I'm just wondering if there should be footnotes.

All-in-all, it's a nice complex mystery that paints a vivid picture of the setting.

The Shetland Sea Murders is available from Amazon here.

About the Author


Marsali Taylor grew up in Musselburgh, and took her first teaching post in the Shetlands. Her main series is the Shetland Sailing Mysteries, puzzle-style crime novels which follow the adventures of sailor Cass Lynch and Inverness DI Gavin Macrae.


Sunday 1 August 2021

Book Review: Style and Solitary by Miriam Drori

 

It looks like I'm diversifying into book blogging, thanks to the blog tours organised by Lynsey Adams of Reading Between the Lines. Today I'm looking at Style and the Solitary, a murder mystery by Miriam Drori which explores social anxiety.

Blurb

An unexpected murder. A suspect with a reason. The power of unwavering belief.

A murder has been committed in an office in Jerusalem. That’s for sure. The rest is not as clear-cut as it might seem. Asaf languishes in his cell, unable to tell his story even to himself. How can he tell it to someone who elicits such fear within him?

His colleague, Nathalie, has studied Beauty and the Beast. She understands its moral. Maybe that’s why she’s the only one who believes in Asaf, the suspect. But she’s new in the company – and in the country. Would anyone take her opinion seriously? She coerces her flatmates, Yarden and Tehila, into helping her investigate. As they uncover new trails, will they be able to reverse popular opinion?

In the end, will Beauty’s belief be strong enough to waken the Beast? Or, in this case, can Style waken the Solitary?

Review

Style and the Solitary is an intriguing mystery with two brilliant protagonists. 

Asaf Levitt is an electrical engineer at a firm based in Jerusalem, who struggles with social anxiety. He has trouble opening up to anybody, and finds authority figures particularly intimidating. This anxiety is brought to a head when he's accused of murdering his colleague, Ido, who had earned a promotion after taking credit for Asaf's work. I'm introverted myself, and have trouble socialising (especially since I haven't done much of it thanks to Covid), so I can really relate to Asaf and sympathise with his plight. To see him come out of his shell as the story progresses is so satisfying.

We also have Nathalie Weyl, a French expatriate living in Jerusalem who works at the same firm as Asaf. She's the only person who believes that Asaf is innocent, and is determined to prove this. Adopting the persona of a gumshoe named Juliette Beauchamp, she investigates the rest of the company's employees, hoping to find other motives for Ido's murder. It plays out like a classic film noir.

I like how the mystery unravels, but the best part is Asaf overcoming his social anxiety. It's a fairly short read, but a pretty good one. It's available here.

About the Author


Miriam Drori was born in the UK and now lives in Israel. She has had four novels published and one non-fiction book, along with a few short stories, including Gruesome in Golders Green in the Dark London charity anthology.

Miriam is passionate about raising awareness of social anxiety.

Happy writing.


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