Thursday 30 December 2021

Writing Hunter's Rules - A Guest Post by Val Penny

Hello everyone. I hope you've had a good Christmas. Today I'm delighted to once again welcome my good friend and fellow Swanwicker Val Penny to the Writer's Block, where she'll be discussing Hunter's Rules her latest instalment in the Edinburgh Crime Mysteries. Over to you, Val.

Thank you so much for inviting me onto your blog today, Andy. I am delighted to have a chance to tell you and your readers about Hunter’s Rules, the new novel in my series of The Edinburgh Crime Thrillers.

I've been writing and telling stories all my life. When I was a child, I used to make up stories for my little sister after our Mum put the light out and told us to go to sleep. Later, I wrote documents, contracts, and courses as part of my job, but my time was well accounted for, so I did not create any fiction.

However, I took early retirement when I was diagnosed with breast cancer, and there were times when I suffered severe side effects from my treatment. I could not go out, spend time with friends or indulge in many of my favourite hobbies, but watching daytime television got very old very fast, so I turned to reading. It was the only thing I had the energy to do and could do safely.

I read voraciously, as I always have. I particularly enjoy reading crime fiction and thrillers. I indulged this interest with many novels including those by Peter Robinson, Ian Rankin, Linwood Barclay and Kathy Reichs. 

After a while, I began to feel a little better and decided to start reviewing the books I read in a blog www.bookreviewstoday.info. I enjoyed doing that. Then, as I began to feel better still, I got restless, but was not well enough to do very much and I complained to my long-suffering husband about getting bored. It was then he challenged me: ‘If you know so much about what makes a good book, why don’t you write one?’ I did laugh. However, the challenge set, I have been writing police procedural crime thrillers set in Scotland ever since.

In fact, my publishers, will publish the sixth book in the series The Edinburgh Crime Mysteries on 01.01.2022. The main character is Detective Inspector Hunter Wilson, Hunter’s Rules.

I did two things with this novel that I have never done before: I don’t kill anybody in the book and the novel, Hunter’s Rules, actually has a prequel in my short story Cats and Dogs, which was published in a charity anthology of short stories, Dark Scotland, published in January 2021. Of course, both the novel and the short story can be read completely independently, but those who have read both may enjoy the conceit. 

I particularly enjoyed writing Hunter’s Rules and hope that my readers will enjoy reading the novel. I plan that the next novel in this series will appear in 2023. It will be entitled Hunter’s Festival and will take place during an Edinburgh summer during the Edinburgh International Festival. I’ll let you know more about that in due course!

Thank you again for hosting me, Andy.

My pleasure, Val. I wish you all the best with Hunter's Rules in the new year.

The Edinburgh Crime Mysteries are available on Amazon: Hunter's Chase, Hunter's Revenge, Hunter's Force, Hunter's Blood, Hunter's Secret, Hunter's Rules.

Hunter’s Rules is the sixth book in Val Penny’s Edinburgh Crime Mysteries series of novels published by Dark Stroke, as is The First Cut, the first book in the new series of Jane Renwick Thrillers.

She has recently contributed her short story, Cats and Dogs to a charity anthology, Dark Scotland. Her short story, The Corpse in the Catacombs will be published in the charity anthology, Dark Paris, shortly.

Val is an American author living in SW Scotland with her husband and their cat.

Wednesday 24 November 2021

Book Review - Snowflake's Big Adventure


I didn't think I'd be including reviews of children's books in my repertoire. I've previously posted a cover reveal of Snowflake's Big Adventure by Erin Mackey. Like before, this post is part of a Reading Between the Lines blog tour organised by Lynsey Adams.

Blurb

Sometimes going out into the world is scary, but it can also be exciting.

We all worry about our place in the world and Little Snowflake is no different. When the day comes for him to fall to Earth for the very first time, he’s filled with worry and wonder.  Guided by Mama Snowflake, Little Snowflake and the others anticipate their destination. He knows the possibilities are endless and wishes he could do them all.  There are so many things he could be, but will any of it be meaningful? Will he be satisfied with his destiny?

Snowflake’s Big Adventure is a fun and engaging picture book that helps children grapple with the age old question: “What is my purpose?” It teaches, them how to overcome anxiety and trust the wisdom of those around them. Combining beautiful pictures with powerful life lessons, this book could be your child’s next lifelong favourite.

Review

I don't really have much to say about this book without cluttering the review by reading too deep or getting cynical about the themes. It's a relatively short read and pretty much does what it advertises; A snowflake falls from the sky and contemplates their purpose in life. In their case, this could be landing on a hill used for sledging, or being made into a snow angel or a snowman. It explores the possibilities. I must confess that as a recent university graduate, the message is one that kind of resonates with me at the moment. All in all, it's kind of wholesome.

Snowflake's Big Adventure is available here.

About the Author


Helping kids to love reading one book at a time.  Erin Mackey writes in various children’s genres, including picture books, early readers, chapter books, middle grade fiction, and Young Adult fiction.  She has more than 40 completed picture book manuscripts and she continues to develop new story ideas on a regular basis.  So far, Erin has published picture books, middle grade fiction, and Young Adult books.  She enjoys spending time with her husband, family, friends, church family, and her crazy cats who constantly entertain her and get into trouble.

Happy writing.


Sunday 24 October 2021

Tricube Tales

 

A new university term has started, and while I'm no longer a student, I still like to be involved in some university societies. Especially the roleplaying game society, since that's a good source of players. With this in mind, I'd been itching to introduce more players to a roleplaying system I discovered recently called Tricube Tales. 

Created by Richard Woolcock, Tricube Tales is a narrative-focussed roleplaying system with a bare minimum of mechanics. I've previously talked about this before, specifically with The Fools Who Follow, in which the players are companions to an imbecilic Chosen One hero, but the system's recently been updated since then.

When players do something risky, the GM assigns a Trait - either Agility, Brawn, or Craft - and a Difficulty ranging from 4 to 6. The player must then roll two six-sided dice and equal or exceed the difficulty on at least one die in order to overcome the challenge. If they achieve this on multiple dice, that's treated as an Exceptional Success and carries an additional benefit. However, if they roll a 1 on all their dice, that's a Critical Failure and introduces a complication.

Character creation is quick and easy, which makes this system ideal for one-shots. Rather than a complex stat block, a Player Character can be summed up in a sentence. The character profile consists of four aspects:

  1. Trait: A character can be Agile, Brawny, or Crafty. If their Trait matches a challenge's Trait, they roll an extra die on that challenge.
  2. Concept: This is typically a character's profession. If a challenge is something that falls outside the scope of their concept (such as a wizard picking a lock or a high school nerd trying to intimidate somebody), they roll one less die.
  3. Perk: This is a special talent or ability, or perhaps even a signature item. If it makes narrative sense, a character can activate their Perk to reduce the difficulty by one after making their roll.
  4. Quirk: This is some kind of hindrance, physical limitation, or personality flaw. Quirks can be activated just like Perks if it makes narrative sense, but this is done before making a roll and increases the difficulty by one.
Players also have three points of Karma and three points of Resolve.
  • Karma represents a character's luck and fortitude. It costs one point of Karma to activate a Perk, but this can be regained by activating a Quirk.
  • Resolve represents a character's health and tenacity. A character loses one point of Resolve if they fail a particularly dangerous challenge, and two on a Critical Failure. If they lose all their Resolve, they're out for the rest of the scene.

I've been collecting all manner of settings, having run The Fools Who Follow for the society's taster session. So far, I've tried two other settings which use the system: 

  • The first is a superhero setting called Metahuman Uprising
  • The second is Tales of the Goblin Horde, an adaptation of Woolcock's Saga of the Goblin Horde setting for Savage Worlds
Both resulted in some silly moments, but I'm still trying to practice the concept of "Effort Tokens" for things which require more than one roll (especially combat).

I'm also looking at running two more settings in the coming weeks:

  • Pirates of the Bone Blade, a Pirates of the Caribbean-inspired fantasy in which the characters are members of a pirate crew seeking to break a curse their former captain left on them.
  • Samhain Slaughter, a horror setting in which the players are high school students with paranormal abilities who defend their small town from monsters.
I think Tricube Tales is a great system which offers a lot of flexibility. It's great for one-shots, but I haven't tried running a campaign with it. If you're interested, you can find the rulebook here.

Happy writing.

Wednesday 13 October 2021

Cover Reveal - Snowflake's Big Adventure by Erin Mackey

 

Blurb

Sometimes going out into the world is scary, but it can also be exciting.

We all worry about our place in the world and Little Snowflake is no different.  When the day comes for him to fall to Earth for the very first time, he’s filled with worry and wonder.  Guided by Mama Snowflake, Little Snowflake and the others anticipate their destination. He knows the possibilities are endless and wishes he could do them all.  There are so many things he could be, but will any of it be meaningful? Will he be satisfied with his destiny?

Snowflake’s Big Adventure is a fun and engaging picture book that helps children grapple with the age old question: “What is my purpose?” It teaches, them how to overcome anxiety and trust the wisdom of those around them. Combining beautiful pictures with powerful life lessons, this book could be your child’s next lifelong favourite.

About the Author

Helping kids to love reading one book at a time.  Erin Mackey writes in various children’s genres, including picture books, early readers, chapter books, middle grade fiction, and Young Adult fiction.  She has more than 40 completed picture book manuscripts and she continues to develop new story ideas on a regular basis.  So far, Erin has published picture books, middle grade fiction, and Young Adult books.  She enjoys spending time with her husband, family, friends, church family, and her crazy cats who constantly entertain her and get into trouble.


Wednesday 6 October 2021

My First Published Work

 

A couple of weeks ago, I published my first book. Well, kind of. To be more accurate, I published my novelette on Amazon for a general release. 

Gentlemen of Fortune is the first book in a series of adventure stories I'm writing featuring the adventures (and misadventures) of the wandering scoundrels Kestrel and Scar. Kestrel is a romantic thrill-seeking English libertine whose impulsive nature tends to land him in sticky situations. Scar, on the other hand, is a cynical Antiguan ex-slave who seeks his fortunes as a pirate while trying to keep Kestrel out of trouble. They travel the Caribbean (and sometimes further afield) in search of wine, women, and song while crossing paths with numerous unsavoury elements from all walks of life. You could say I wanted to do some Pirates of the Caribbean-type stories but without the fantasy elements which bog down the later films.

In this story, we follow the pair as they're hired as bodyguards by Rosanna Barclay, a former lady-in-waiting who has arrived in Port Royal in search of her missing father, Captain Nathaniel Barclay. They soon learn that he was a pirate who disappeared after attacking a French payroll carrier, and double-crossed his sponsor, Lord Pettigrew. The race is soon on to find Captain Barclay before Pettigrew does.

I started writing Gentlemen of Fortune in 2015, and it went through numerous re-writes over the following years while I exercised other story ideas using the characters. I eventually decided to self-publish it this year for one of my final-year university assignments. It was being considered by one publisher at the time, but they were willing to accommodate the assignment. I printed a couple of paperbacks to submit for assessment and sell at the Book Room at Swanwick. Since the Swanwick copies sold well, I decided to withdraw my submission from the publisher and self-publish via KDP.

With all that said, what happens now? Well, I've got a couple of other Kestrel and Scar stories in the works set before and after Gentlemen of Fortune. I'm currently working on an immediate follow-up, The Pirate King, in which Kestrel and Scar learn that Pettigrew isn't the only one with a score to settle with Captain Barclay.

In the meantime, Gentlemen of Fortune is now available on Amazon in e-book and paperback formats. I'm also planning a launch event on my Facebook page (unless it goes down again). There'll be a pirate trivia quiz with a signed paperback for the winner, along with music and cool art I found on Pinterest.

Bring me that horizon, and happy writing.

Friday 17 September 2021

Book Review: Devil's Cauldron by Alasdair Wham

 

I've been reading a lot of thrillers lately. Today I'm looking at Devil's Cauldron by Alistair Wham. This post was written as part of a Reading Between the Lines blog tour organised by Lynsey Adams.

Blurb

What would you do if you saw your father murdered and no one believed you? When he was twelve, Finn McAdam saw his father, a scientist, murdered. No one believed him. Now he has returned to his native Galloway to discover the truth. Wherever it leads him. Whatever it costs. But the conspiracy he discovers exposes a cover-up involving leading political figures and places his life in great danger. Some people are determined that the truth must not get out.

Review

This was a pretty good thriller with a strong 39 Steps feel to it. In fact, that's even discussed in the story itself. I was rooting for Finn as he tries to uncover the mystery surrounding his father's death, but he's stonewalled and then threatened at every turn. It's almost as if he is a new Richard Hannay. Familiar, yet fresh.

There's an interesting array of side characters who inhabit the campsite where Finn is staying for the majority of the story. One of the most notable characters is Rougvie, a joiner staying in the tent next to Finn's who's volunteering for an organisation monitoring red squirrel populations. At first, Finn is put off by him, especially when he drunkenly made a pass at a woman nearly half his age (prompting a confrontation with her soldier boyfriend until it's de-escalated by another camper known only as The Colonel), but he soon proves to be a valuable ally in his quest. Said woman, Jessica Hamilton, turns out to be on a similar quest to Finn.

As the story progresses, there's a great albeit protracted sequence in which Finn and Jess are infiltrating the estate of a local aristocrat implicated in the plot, who sends his goons after them. It ramps up the tension really well, with a brilliant payoff.

I love the setting, and how the story unravels. I don't want to say much else to avoid spoiling it, but it's worth reading through.

Devil's Cauldron is available from Amazon here.

About the Author

Alasdair's first two two novels were set in Islay and Mull (west coast of Scotland) and have proved very successful, rich in local detail with interesting plots. His third novel, Devil's Cauldron, is set in Galloway which is in south-west Scotland, he likes to write about places that he knows the best.

Before he turned to fiction, he produced a series of books exploring Scotland's lost railways, a hobby that he enjoys with his sons and that took him all over Scotland.



Happy writing.

Sunday 5 September 2021

Book Review: Release by Karen Moore

 

For today's review, I'm going to be looking at Release by Karen Moore. This post was written as part of a Reading Between the Lines blog tour organised by Lynsey Adams.

Blurb

When Hanna’s estranged mafioso husband, Luciano, is released early from a Sicilian prison, she fears he will come after her and her young daughter, Eva. 

The revelation leaves her with a dilemma. Invited to Sicily to attend her best friend’s wedding, can she really take the risk?

But even staying at home in North Wales may not be safe. Something strange is going on at her old cottage in the hills. As the lines between Sicily and North Wales blur, Hanna uncovers a criminal operation that leads her to fear for Eva’s life all over again. 

Will Hanna ever be able to release herself from Luciano’s grip? Or will her discovery lead her into even deeper danger?

Review

Release is the sequel to Karen Moore's debut novel, Torn. I haven't read that one, but I was able to follow the story enough to understand the events. In fact, reading this one has made me interested in reading Torn.

A lot of the story seems to involve Hanna's interactions with Eva. I did get a sense of nostalgia from the interactions, thinking about holidays I had in Wales when I was a child. Nevertheless, I was able to find an underlying tension as Hanna learns about Luciano's release, along with her partner Rhys stumbling across what seems to be a human trafficking operation making use of their holiday let.

Hanna's best friend Ceri is getting married to Sergio, an investigative reporter and the son of a police officer, who has been running stories exposing numerous scams operated by the mafia. This provides another source of tension as he's likely to be targeted. It provides some great build-up with a truly harrowing pay-off.

Overall, it's a brilliant mystery in some vivid settings.

Release is available from Amazon here.

About the Author

Karen Moore is passionate about all things noir – crime, mystery, thrillers – and writes in that genre.

She has been writing all her life, mostly for work purposes, and is now delighted to be able to spend more time developing her own creative work.

Her debut novel, Torn, is a dark tale of intrigue and betrayal set in Sicily and North Wales. Release is the sequel, although it is written as a standalone novel for people who may not have read Torn.

Karen worked as a tour guide across Europe, North America and Canada, followed by a career in PR and marketing. She has lived in France and Italy, and is now based in Cheshire, England. Her cat, Lexi, often appears in her social media feeds.

Happy writing.


Friday 13 August 2021

The Belated Return to Swanwick

 

It's that time of year again; my annual visit to the Swanwick Writers' Summer School, just delayed by a year thanks to some pandemic which probably has a personality that's even more unbearable than that of the Epideme virus in Red Dwarf. After the isolation of the last eighteen months, I was so glad to be back. Swanwick is normally my big summer social, and last year's cancellation hit me pretty hard, with the week when it was going to take place spent at home drinking. Anyway, with that cheeriness out of the way, let's talk about the week. With some apprehension which later passed as the week went on, I was once again able to head to the picturesque Derbyshire surroundings of the Hayes Conference Centre. With that in mind, let me share this year's cavalcade of take-homes and anecdotes.

A Milestone

This has been my fifth visit to Swanwick, and one big first for me was that I actually had something published which I could sell in The Book Room, thanks to the publication project in one of my third year university modules. I took advantage of a discount I had with a printing service to produce a batch of copies of my pirate novelette, Gentlemen of Fortune, specially for Swanwick. Granted, there'd been a little bit of a misadventure on the first night when I'd forgotten to fill in the paperwork for the book room, having arrived later than most after the coach had been delayed. While I was wrangling that, the Book Room closed while everyone was attending the chairperson's welcome. Then I was told I'd forgotten to put price tags in the books. However, I got that sorted out quickly, by which time the queue at the bar had died down. As the week went on, people were coming to me with the copies that they'd bought, asking me to sign them. It felt great, and by the end of the week I'd sold two thirds of my stock.

Not only did I have a book out, but I also ran a course this year. On Tuesday, commonly known as the "procrastination-free day", I ran an hour-long workshop on Character Motivations. This was an attempt to apply Shalom H. Schwartz's "Theory of Basic Human Values" to characters in fiction, and was originally written in my first year. It was thin on the ground - partly due to clashes with other courses such as Val Penny's workshop on Writing Suspense, which I would have gone to myself if I hadn't been teaching this one -  but that made things a little more comfortable for me, teaching to a smaller group. I probably could have explained some parts a little better, and maybe should have used some well-known examples, perhaps from the same work if possible. But some people did come up to me and say they enjoyed it, and those who weren't able to attend for one reason or another told me they'd heard good things. All in all, not bad for my first attempt at teaching a course.

Specialist Courses

As always, courses at Swanwick are divided into three categories: Specialist Courses, which comprise four hour-long sessions spread across the week; Short Courses, which comprise two sessions which take place on the same day, with lunch in-between; and Workshops, which comprise a single session.

My chosen specialist course this year was on Writing Historical Fiction, presented by Michael Jecks. I consider historical fiction to be one of my main genres, but with a rather pulpy tone. I suppose I'd call my work "action/adventure", but taking place in historical settings. I have used actual historical figures in some projects, but it's not always easy to get a feel of the characters of the individuals in question. The course looked at pointers for historical research, along with common pitfalls. He also discussed the markets and returns for the author in publishing. There was even a session in which he talked about how he drew influence from people from his past as inspiration for some characters. Even though my stories take place in the past, I sometimes draw influence from aspects of my own life. I quite like using the historical settings to distance myself from those events, especially those that can be painful for me.

Unfortunately, the last session was complicated by an incident that morning, in which an apparent bird strike on a transformer had resulted in a village-wide power cut. With a cold breakfast and a limited supply of coffee, I was sat in the dark conference hall wondering if the power would be back on before the morning break since none of the hot drink dispensers were functioning. Thankfully, the lights came back on midway through the session, and a disaster was averted.

Short Courses

There was a great array of short courses this year, often marred by the fact that there's always going to be two interesting ones happening on the same day.

Sunday's short course was on Show-Stopping Story Writing, hosted by Bettina von Cossel. I'm definitely one of those writers who falls into the "Show, don't tell" school of thought. As I mainly write shorter fiction, I find that I prefer to show, as it paints a more vivid picture. This course was all about that, through use of body language to convey characters' emotions (even getting asked to share a crib sheet I'd shared before), and the use of the senses to help establish settings. There was a fantastic exercise in which we were asked to put a character in a circus, thinking about what atmosphere would be provided by the setting, and perhaps showing the protagonist in the setting to establish their character. It had made me think about the visual storytelling in Who Framed Roger Rabbit, and how that kind of thing could be done in prose.

On Monday, I settled on Full Time Writers in the Gig Economy, with Anita Belli and Gerald Hornsby. After all, I've finished university and have moved out of my parents' house now. I'm going to need to find ways to earn a living through writing while adopting a bohemian lifestyle to compensate for losing out on the student experience thanks to this pandemic. The course discussed different types of publishing, along with ghostwriting (which I landed my first job in last month), editing and proofreading, and teaching. I'm certainly leaving my options open.

On Wednesday, I looked at Creating a Series with Diana Kimpton. I chose this one because I intended to make more stories featuring the adventures of Kestrel and Scar, both before and after the events of Gentlemen of Fortune. I'm definitely looking at doing them as a freestanding series, making each story self-contained. The course also looked at how to publish and market a series. There was even one exercise in which Diana asked the class to mind-map a series from one prompt. When she chose pirates, I noticed a few eyes turning towards me.

Thursday involved a visit to Simon Hall's Character Clarifier. I've attended previous courses on characters run by Simon Hall, and this one was familiar yet fresh. The workshop looked at ways to establish a character through their appearance and mannerisms, and writing scenes which involved them interacting with others through a date, a minor mishap (a waiter spilling a drink on them), and a more serious incident (a fire at the location of the date). Unfortunately, I was only able to attend the first session, because I needed to leave the afternoon free to write before the Annual General Meeting.

Evening Events


Swanwick had its usual array of evening events, including a "Birds of a Feather" event on the first night in which you could meet up with authors who wrote in the same genre as you and exchange advice or bounce ideas.

Unfortunately, I missed out on a fair bit this year. For example, I had to dedicate time to evening writing sessions to meet an upcoming deadline on a ghostwriting project. Other times, there were two events which I was interested in which took place at the same time. Case and point, the Monday night Poetry Open Mic and the General Knowledge Quiz. I was interested in both, but ultimately chose the quiz. Didn't win though.

Of course, there's always the fancy dress disco, with this year's theme being Roaring Twenties. I donned a Peaky Blinders-style flat cap with my trademark brown suit which miraculously still fits despite the lockdown kummerspeck, and even had my hair cut before heading out. It was a lot of fun, and the point in the week when a lot of people had been able to lighten up. I even ended up judging the best fancy dress costumes. My Charleston probably needs work though.

Of course, there's also the dregs party on the final night. I spent a portion of the night on the lawn by the new fire pits, and even lay back and watched the stars at one point.

I've truly missed being at Swanwick while this pandemic's been raging. I'd heard warnings that if it didn't go ahead this year, it wouldn't be going ahead at all. I love Swanwick, and I wanted to keep that ship sailing, so I decided to successfully run for next year's Committee. I'm looking forward to Swanwick 2022.

Happy writing.

I've missed you too.


Saturday 7 August 2021

Book Review: The Shetland Sea Murders by Marsali Taylor

 

I've been reading a lot of murder mysteries lately. Today I'm looking at The Shetland Sea Murders by Marsali Taylor. this post is part of a Reading Between the Lines blog tour organised by Lynsey Adams.

Blurb

Marsali Taylor returns with the ninth gripping mystery in her Shetland Sailing Mystery series.

While onboard her last chartered sailing trip of the season, Cass Lynch is awoken in the middle of the night by a Mayday call to the Shetland coastguard. A fishing vessel has become trapped on the rocks off the coast of one of the islands.

In the days that follow, there's both a shocking murder and a baffling death. On the surface there's no link, but when Cass becomes involved it is soon clear that her life is also in danger.

Convinced that someone sinister is at work in these Shetland waters, Cass is determined to find and stop them. But uncovering the truth could prove to be deadly...

Review

With this being the ninth book in the series, I was concerned that there may have been a lot of past events to catch up on. Fortunately, this story seemed self-contained enough that I didn't pick up on anything of that sort.

The story provides plenty of layers of intrigue and drama, with Cass finding herself embroiled in a family matter on the trip she's serving on; the sailing trip is for the birthday of a man named Stevie, but one of his nieces wants him to face justice for historic child abuse, while his other niece wants to cover it up. On top of that, a man named Paul Roberts (no relation) is visiting the community, but most of the locals are wary of him. It's a slow burning plot, but it certainly thickens as it goes on.

I must admit that I did struggle with a lot of the Shetland dialect in the story. While it does help ground the setting, it can be difficult to follow at times. Fortunately, there is a glossary at the end of the book, but I'm just wondering if there should be footnotes.

All-in-all, it's a nice complex mystery that paints a vivid picture of the setting.

The Shetland Sea Murders is available from Amazon here.

About the Author


Marsali Taylor grew up in Musselburgh, and took her first teaching post in the Shetlands. Her main series is the Shetland Sailing Mysteries, puzzle-style crime novels which follow the adventures of sailor Cass Lynch and Inverness DI Gavin Macrae.


Sunday 1 August 2021

Book Review: Style and Solitary by Miriam Drori

 

It looks like I'm diversifying into book blogging, thanks to the blog tours organised by Lynsey Adams of Reading Between the Lines. Today I'm looking at Style and the Solitary, a murder mystery by Miriam Drori which explores social anxiety.

Blurb

An unexpected murder. A suspect with a reason. The power of unwavering belief.

A murder has been committed in an office in Jerusalem. That’s for sure. The rest is not as clear-cut as it might seem. Asaf languishes in his cell, unable to tell his story even to himself. How can he tell it to someone who elicits such fear within him?

His colleague, Nathalie, has studied Beauty and the Beast. She understands its moral. Maybe that’s why she’s the only one who believes in Asaf, the suspect. But she’s new in the company – and in the country. Would anyone take her opinion seriously? She coerces her flatmates, Yarden and Tehila, into helping her investigate. As they uncover new trails, will they be able to reverse popular opinion?

In the end, will Beauty’s belief be strong enough to waken the Beast? Or, in this case, can Style waken the Solitary?

Review

Style and the Solitary is an intriguing mystery with two brilliant protagonists. 

Asaf Levitt is an electrical engineer at a firm based in Jerusalem, who struggles with social anxiety. He has trouble opening up to anybody, and finds authority figures particularly intimidating. This anxiety is brought to a head when he's accused of murdering his colleague, Ido, who had earned a promotion after taking credit for Asaf's work. I'm introverted myself, and have trouble socialising (especially since I haven't done much of it thanks to Covid), so I can really relate to Asaf and sympathise with his plight. To see him come out of his shell as the story progresses is so satisfying.

We also have Nathalie Weyl, a French expatriate living in Jerusalem who works at the same firm as Asaf. She's the only person who believes that Asaf is innocent, and is determined to prove this. Adopting the persona of a gumshoe named Juliette Beauchamp, she investigates the rest of the company's employees, hoping to find other motives for Ido's murder. It plays out like a classic film noir.

I like how the mystery unravels, but the best part is Asaf overcoming his social anxiety. It's a fairly short read, but a pretty good one. It's available here.

About the Author


Miriam Drori was born in the UK and now lives in Israel. She has had four novels published and one non-fiction book, along with a few short stories, including Gruesome in Golders Green in the Dark London charity anthology.

Miriam is passionate about raising awareness of social anxiety.

Happy writing.


Sunday 11 July 2021

Book Review: Hunter's Chase (The Audiobook) by Val Penny

 

Val Penny is a fellow Swanwicker who has been looking out for me as things got rough over this past year. As a token of my gratitude, I agreed to take a look at the newly released audiobook of Hunter's Chase, the first book in her "tartan noire" series of detective stories, The Edinburgh Crime Mysteries, as part of a blog tour organised by Reading Between the Lines. I pick up copies of these books as soon as they're released, and often finish them in the space of a day.

Blurb

Hunter by name – Hunter by nature: DI Hunter Wilson will not rest until Edinburgh is safe.

Detective Inspector Hunter Wilson knows there is a new supply of cocaine flooding his city, and he needs to find the source, but his attention is transferred to murder when a corpse is discovered in the grounds of a golf course. 

Shortly after the post-mortem, Hunter witnesses a second murder, but that is not the end of the slaughter. With a young woman's life also hanging in the balance, the last thing Hunter needs is a new man on his team: Detective Constable Tim Myerscough, the son of his nemesis, the former Chief Constable Sir Peter Myerscough. 

Hunter's perseverance and patience are put to the test time after time in this first novel in The Edinburgh Crime Mysteries series.

Review

Hunter's Chase is a gripping mystery with an excellent cast of characters on both sides of the law. Edinburgh provides the mystery's urban setting, yet it also presents a small-town feel in which everyone knows everyone. 

Hunter is a determined investigator, and his team shares a great camaraderie. I especially like DC Mel Grant for her snarky dialogue, which is on par with some of Hunter's. Her scathing wit is especially noticeable during her interactions with Jamie Thompson, a burglary suspect detained at the beginning of the story, who found the first body. Another prominent character is DC Tim Myerscough, of whom Hunter is initially apprehensive, but soon gains his trust as the story progresses. In fact, all of the characters seem believable and realistic.

Sean Pia, who narrates the audiobook, has a great voice. It's very soothing, and fits the setting well. I must confess that I did pick up a few gaffes here and there, with lines being repeated, but that's not a major issue. It's a story that I get invested in early on, with some great twists, some funny lines, and even some truly poignant moments.

The Hunter's Chase audiobook is available via Audible here: https://www.audible.co.uk/pd/Hunters-Chase-Audiobook/B092CDB6ZX

About the Author

Val Penny’s other crime novels, Hunter's Chase, Hunter's Revenge, Hunter's Force, Hunter’s Blood, and Hunter’s Secret form the bestselling series The Edinburgh Crime Mysteries. They are set in Edinburgh, Scotland, published by Darkstroke. Her first non-fiction book, Let’s Get Published, is also available now and she has most recently contributed her short story, Cats and Dogs, to a charity anthology, Dark Scotland.

Val is an American author living in SW Scotland with her husband and their cat.



Monday 28 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Wrap Up

 

Well, that was a fun experience, and got some use out of my Channel 4 membership. Now I wait another two years before they decide to close my account.

Cowboy Bebop still stands as one of my favourite animes, and one of my favourite shows of all time. The action is great, the characters are memorable, and the music kicks ass.

I love writing about characters who are misfits in their societies, and this show has these in spades. I feel for all the Bebop crew: Spike presents himself as a happy-go-lucky thrill-seeker, which hides a death wish over a shady past he's never been able to fully walk away from; Jet tries to present himself as a wise mentor, but his sense of morality isn't compatible with a society that's rife with corruption and isolates him from his few friends; Faye is a fish out water due to being in a cryogenic sleep for 54 years, and has been swindled by everyone she's known; Ed was abandoned by her absent-minded father, and her eccentric nature possibly conceals a state of denial over this.

What are my favourite episodes? Hmm...I'm trying to figure out whether I want to do a standard top ten, or my favourite comedic and dramatic episodes.

I'll do both.

My top five comedic episodes:

  1. Cowboy Funk
  2. Mushroom Samba
  3. Toys in the Attic
  4. Stray Dog Strut
  5. Speak Like a Child
My top five dramatic episodes:
  1. The Real Folk Blues Part 2
  2. Jupiter Jazz Part 2
  3. Black Dog Serenade
  4. Ballad of Fallen Angels
  5. Pierrot Le Fou
That's about it. Now I need to prep a project for Camp NaNoWriMo.

Until then, happy writing.

I mean, "See You, Space Cowboy".

Sunday 27 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Sessions 25 & 26: The Real Folk Blues (Part 1 & 2)

 

Well, it's the grand finale, and what a finale.

While Spike and Jet are sitting in a bar, they're attacked in force by hitmen. Although Jet is wounded in the leg, they escape with the help of Shin, a disgruntled member of the Red Dragon Syndicate. Shin explains that Vicious attempted to usurp power from the leaders of the syndicate, and they're now purging all of his former associates. Meanwhile, Faye encounters Julia, Spike's old flame who is also being targeted by the syndicate. She asks Faye to relay a message to Spike, saying that she'll be waiting. As Spike and Julia reunite, Vicious escapes his execution and assassinates the Red Dragon's leaders, taking over the syndicate. After Julia is killed, Spike heads to the Red Dragon's headquarters for the final confrontation.

This episode finally reveals this mysterious part of Spike's backstory through flashbacks: Spike and Vicious were both enforcers for the Red Dragons. When Spike had an affair with Julia, who was in a relationship with Vicious, he wanted to elope with her and leave the syndicate. As the syndicates don't allow their members to leave, Spike got into a shootout at an old church, in which he faked his own death and planned to rendezvous with Julia afterwards. However, Julia never showed, as Vicious had learned of her plan and told her to kill Spike or else he'd kill them both, after which she went into hiding.

There's a lot of action in both parts. The first part has the aforementioned shootout in the bar, along with a car chase as Faye helps Julia elude her assassins, and a space battle pitting the Swordfish and Red Tail against syndicate gunships. The second act features Spike and Julia having a running gun battle across rooftops, before loading himself up with guns and explosives and storming the syndicate's headquarters.

In addition to the action, we also get a fair bit of drama, and not just through the flashbacks. My favourite scene takes place just before the final confrontation; Spike returns to the Bebop and re-unites with Jet, who cooks him a meal. Spike tells a fable, and claims he hates it because it features cats, and he and Jet share a laugh. It's one of the few times I've seen them do this, and there's the underlying fact that Spike's upcoming battle is his fight and he's doing it alone. It may be the last time they see each other again.

This is probably one of the strongest episodes in terms of drama, and a great ending.

Bang.

Saturday 26 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 24: Hard Luck Woman

 

We're almost at the end. Two more episodes to go, but they're a two-parter so I'm gonna review them both together.

Faye studies the home video obtained in "Speak Like a Child", eager to find out who she is and where she's originally from. When Ed claims to know the location of the video, they change the Bebop's course and head to Earth. They travel to an orphanage where Ed once resided, and learn that Ed's father previously visited in search of her. Faye later encounters one of her school friends, who has now aged when she hasn't. Meanwhile, Spike and Jet pursue a lucrative bounty on Ed's father, Siniz Hesap Luften Appledehi.

This episode is largely focussed on Ed and Faye. It's largely comedic, showing that Ed's father is just as eccentric and quirky as she is. It turns out that he's a cartographer looking to create new maps of Earth (which is impossible due to the constant meteor showers). There's an action scene as Spike and Jet try to bring him in, but he easily subdues them. Then Ed appears and re-unites with him, revealing that she'd posted the bounty and it isn't as much as they originally thought.

As silly as this episode is, it's also downright depressing. Faye arrives at her childhood home, only to find it in ruins. Meanwhile, Ed's father offers her the chance to travel with him, but runs off to pursue another meteorite impact before she can answer. She ultimately decides to leave the Bebop and go after him, and Ein goes with her.

Well, I guess it's just a breather for the finale.

Friday 25 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 23: Brain Scratch

 

"Cleansing the soul" always sounded rather ominous to me.

A mysterious figure known as "Dr Londes" has established a cult known as "Brain Scratch", which offers immortality through the upload of spirit to the internet. After a number of suspicious deaths and disappearances, a bounty is placed on Londes. When Spike notices Faye being interviewed as a member of Scratch, he and Jet conduct their own investigation. Spike takes the direct approach by asking Scratch members, while Jet tries to find those believed to have worked with Londes. Unfortunately, neither of them are able to yield results.

After the laughs of "Cowboy Funk", the way is being paved for some of the more dramatic episodes. This episode is kinda philosophical and depressing. One big thing that occurs is the cancellation of Big Shot, which provided a comedic tone while discussing the bounty of the week. There's not much in the way action, but I love the mystery. It's also interesting to see Ein get involved in the story; Jet uses a special headset to try and join Scratch, but it emits a high frequency which almost puts him into a coma until Ein senses something's amiss and bites him.

I must admit that there are times when I feel like it's re-treading the same ground as "Jamming With Edward" with a manhunt involving cyberspace, but that gives Ed something to do.

Londes provides an interesting philosophy on how television is the greatest and worst invention of all time, and how it's become a religion in and of itself. But the reveal of who Londes really is ends up being quite poignant. I'm not going to share the details on here.

Thursday 24 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 22: Cowboy Funk


This is my favourite episode, since I'm a big fan of westerns and because it's also one of the funniest episodes in the series.

Spike is going after a bounty known as "The Teddy Bomber", a serial bomber who targets high-rise buildings using explosives concealed in teddy bears. Unfortunately, his hunt puts him in competition with rival bounty hunter named Andy Von De Oniyate. At first, Jet and Faye are incredulous of Spike's story, but then encounter "Cowboy Andy" and find his destructive nature too similar to that of Spike's.

Being the egotistical prick that he is, Cowboy Andy steals the show in this episode. Hailing from a rich family, he takes up bounty hunting for the thrill of it and fashions himself as a Hollywood gunslinger: he uses a six shooter and a lasso, dresses like a cowboy, and even travels everywhere on a horse. He's accompanied by his leitmotif, "Go Go Cactus Man" which other characters can somehow hear (to the point where Spike thinks he's approaching when he hears someone whistling). Even when Faye spends the evening with him, he toasts his reflection in her eyes.

The other main "focus" character is the Teddy Bomber, although some audiences may be uncomfortable with his methods (this episode was pulled from broadcasts around the time 9/11 happened). There's a running joke in which he gives a monologue about his motive, but he's cut off or ignored every time he gives it. He actually gets angry when Spike and Andy are too busy bickering with each other to listen to him. He even sends a letter to Big Shot, dropping hints about his next target to lure the bounty hunters out, and includes his speech...which gets cut off because they ran out of time.

It all boils down to a final showdown between the two rivals, with a comedic payoff.

See you, space samurai.

Wednesday 23 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 21: Boogie Woogie Feng Shui

 

Feng Shui is something I know little about, but it nonetheless intrigues me.

Jet receives a cryptic email from an old acquaintance, Pao Pu-Zi, whom he knows as one of the most prominent Feng Shui masters on Mars. His initial search takes him to a cemetery, where he finds Pao's tombstone. He meets Pao's teenage daughter Meifa, and they escape an ambush by a pair of assassins who bear a close resemblance to the Blues Brothers. As the rest of the crew speculate over Jet's relationship with Meifa, he learns that Pao was apparently killed in a hyperspace fluctuation while travelling to Jupiter. Having more questions, Jet accompanies Meifa as she searches for an item known as "the Sunstone". He later ambushes the Blues Brothers and learns they're from the Blue Snake crime syndicate, and were following Meifa in the hopes that she'd lead them to her father. Jet later reveals to Meifa that Pao was a consultant for the syndicate but wanted out, and had given information to Jet when he was a detective for the ISSP.

This is another episode which largely centres on Jet as he solves the mystery. It's interesting to see the plot unravel, and there's still some humour over the rest of the crew's speculation.

There's some great action, with Jet subduing the Blues Brothers, showing that he uses a less refined fighting style compared to Spike's martial arts techniques. We later get a cool dogfight as a Blue Snake ship pursues the Bebop into hyperspace while they're following a path the sunstone is leading them on. It provides a truly poignant ending as they use it to locate Pao.

That's about it. I'm hyped for tomorrow's session, which is one of my favourite episodes.

Tuesday 22 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 20: Pierrot Le Fou

 

Damn, this one's creepy. It's also one of my favourite episodes.

While leaving a pool hall, Spike witnesses a shooting by a mysterious assassin. When the assassin turns on Spike, he displays an ability to fly through the air and can even stop bullets with a forcefield. After Spike narrowly escapes with his life, Jet learns that the assassin is known as "Mad Pierrot", and he's killed several high-ranking ISSP members. Spike later gets a message from Pierrot inviting him to the "Space Land" amusement park. While Spike goes off to confront him, Jet tasks Ed with finding more info on Mad Pierrot, who turns to be the test subject in a cancelled project to create a super-soldier.

Pierrot carries this episode. He's essentially a mash-up of several Batman villains; he resembles The Penguin in both appearance and attire, has a laugh and personality reminiscent of The Joker, and an origin story similar to that of Bane. He's also one of Spike's toughest opponents and almost like a slasher movie bogeyman; he can't be reasoned with, he can't be hurt with bullets, he can fly, he's carrying a massive arsenal of weapons, and he wants nothing more than to kill. His only apparent weakness is that he's afraid of cats.

The first act utilises shadowy visuals that create an eerie and haunting atmosphere. This gives way to a more glitzy style during the confrontation in Space Land, which looks incredibly tacky. However, this sequence also contains some more explosive action as Spike and Pierrot duke it out in the amusement park. The setting allows for a lot of creative action as the pair fight on different rides. And the end result definitely brings new meaning to "Kids can be so cruel" while also providing a comedic edge when Jet shares what he and Ed have learned.

One of the best. And I agree with Spike; I hate theme parks.

Monday 21 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 19: Wild Horses

 

Which Blue Sox is Miles rooting for? I've found at least four currently active teams with that name.

As Jet and Faye go after some pirates, Spike takes the Swordfish to his old friend Doohan to get it overhauled. He meets Doohan's assistant, Miles, a talkative baseball enthusiast and avid supporter of the "Blue Sox". Meanwhile, Jet and Faye's sting operation fails when the pirate gang infects the Red Tail's systems with a computer virus, prompting it to go haywire and shoot at the Hammerhead. After the pirates insult the Bebop, Jet is eager to bring them in, and Spike reluctantly agrees after receiving Doohan's invoice.

This is one of the more light-hearted episodes, but there isn't really much to it. However, it does delve into the origins of the Swordfish without being a flashback episode. It turns out that Spike originally obtained his craft from Doohan, and that it was originally a mono-racer. We don't get much more than that, but it's interesting to get some insight into Spike's past that doesn't involve Julia or Vicious.

There are still some great moments. One funny part involves Spike and Faye planning to ambush the pirates, going on information that they're travelling in a cargo hauler with a purple penguin on the side. When they see two identical haulers leaving the truck stop, Faye suggests they shoot at both and see which one runs (which Spike claims is the first time he agrees with Faye on something). Naturally, Jet is aghast at this plan, but they carry it out anyway only to find that both haulers leave. Faye pursues one of them, but it turns out to be a real hauler and the pilots think they're being accosted for an unpaid parking ticket.

The main action scene happens shortly afterwards, when Spike is forced to disable his systems after being hit by the pirates, and finds himself facing a potentially fatal re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere. Miles picks up the incident on his radio while listening to a baseball game, and he and Doohan try and pick Spike up using an old space shuttle. The whole thing has a Gerry Anderson vibe, albeit with second-hand technology. It's also kinda sad to see how unperturbed Spike is about the whole thing.

All in all, this episode has its moments, but isn't one of my favourites. And hot damn, that teaser for the next episode is creepy.

Sunday 20 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 18: Speak Like a Child

 

This episode is kinda pointless. Even the teaser acknowledged this fact. And that's what makes it funny.

The Bebop is visited by a courier drone with a package for Faye, which Jet reluctantly accepts. When he asks Faye to reimburse him for the shipping and handling charges, Faye leaves for a day at the races. Meanwhile, Spike impulsively opens the package to find it contains an antique Betamax cassette. They attempt to sell it to a local expert on 20th Century technology, but the tape gets caught in his player and Spike promptly breaks it. Ed later discovers that there may be a working Betamax player in an abandoned underground museum on Earth. Spike and Jet venture into the derelict underground and recover the technology. Unfortunately, upon their return they discover that they've picked up a VCR.

This is essentially a filler episode, and what TV Tropes refers to as a "shaggy dog story"; a quest which is rendered moot when it ends. But it's still a funny episode. Jet discusses how he should carry out tests on the package to ensure it doesn't contain explosives or biological agents, while Spike just opens it. Later on, their visit to the expert concludes with Spike trying to perform percussive maintenance on the Betamax player, with him later claiming "my ship works when I kick it". The second act consists of the precarious journey through the underground museum, with the aforementioned punchline.

However, there is some dramatic moment at the end; the crew receives a working Betamax player and are finally able to watch the cassette, which turns out to be a home video made by a teenage Faye. As she watches, she's unable to recall who she really is.

Despite not amounting to much, it's still a funny episode.

Saturday 19 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 17: Mushroom Samba

 

After yesterday's dramatic episode, we've got a funny one. Specifically one which is essentially a 70s-era drug comedy and Blaxploitation parody.

The Bebop crew is at rock bottom, with no food, no money, and no fuel. After a hit-an-run collision with another ship, the Bebop crash lands on Io. As the crew make repairs, Ed is sent to find food with Ein. Their quest brings them into contact with Domino Walker, a wanted drug dealer who has been selling hallucinogenic mushrooms. The pair also come into conflict with Shaft, one of Domino's dissatisfied customers, and a Pam Grier-esque bounty hunter also on Domino's trail.

This episode largely focusses on Ed finding food, ultimately getting her hands on some mushrooms which Domino had dropped while running away from Shaft. When Ein one of the mushrooms and starts hopping, Ed believes they're not food. This is later proven when she leaves the other mushrooms out back at the Bebop. Spike, Jet, and Faye all eat one and begin hallucinating. We see the hallucinations through Spike and Faye's eyes, and are then treated to what Ed actually sees them doing. Ed later recognises Domino when his face is shown on Big Shot and goes after him, culminating in all parties chasing each other on a moving train.

While I'm not the biggest fan of drug comedy, I still get plenty of laughs out of this episode. My favourite joke has to be Shaft's introduction, where he's seen dragging a coffin through town like Django (the Franco Nero one, not the Jamie Foxx one). He later confronts Domino and announces his intent to put him that coffin. As soon as he's said that, the coffin is hit by a truck and smashed.

All in all, it's a good episode, and shows what the doldrums of life are like at their worst for our protagonists.

Friday 18 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 16: Black Dog Serenade

 

Looks like Jet is getting another day in the limelight.

A prison ship had faced mechanical difficulties while transporting convicts to Pluto, causing the inmates to riot and take it over. Jet is contacted by Fad, his old partner in the ISSP, who reveals that one of the inmates was Udai Taxim, a former assassin for a syndicate in Europa who has a history with Jet; during his time in the ISSP, Jet and Fad attempted to arrest Udai in a sting operation, but were led into a trap in which Jet lost his arm. After replacing it with a mechanical arm, he left the ISSP to become a bounty hunter. Jet is initially reluctant to go back to working with Fad and the ISSP, but soon relents when he feels the need to settle the score.

I realise I made a slight mistake in an earlier post, saying that Jet's last ISSP posting was Ganymede. In actual fact, he left Ganymede when Alisa left him, but was still in the ISSP at that point. I've amended that now. Anyway, like the "Ganymede Elegy" session, this one is purely focussed on Jet and delves into his past.

Udai has a menacing presence, and is not somebody you'd want to meet on a dark night. Jet mentions he's old-fashioned, determining that he'll travel to Europa and attempt to contact his old syndicate. In a way, both Jet and Udai are similar in that they're both relics of a bygone age.

There's a great flying sequence as Jet and Fad attempt to infiltrate the prison ship, and it's great to see Jet confronting Udai. But the real twist adds a lot of depth to Fad, who carries the episode.

Plus, I love the song "Farewell Blues". The tune previously appeared as a music box tune in "Waltz for Venus", but now we get a sax version.

Thursday 17 June 2021

Cowboy Bebop Marathon - Session 15: My Funny Valentine

 

Ooh, an origin story!

As Jet goes off to apprehend a con artist, Faye tells Ein about her past. The rest of the first act is told in flashback. Three years earlier, Faye was awoken from a cryogenic sleep following an accident which occurred 54 years earlier. Despite having no memory, she was promptly saddled with an extortionate medical bill. She's visited by Whitney Haggis Matsumoto, ostensibly a lawyer from the insurance company looking into her case. Faye escapes from the hospital, and but is found by Whitney, who promises to help her. They soon develop affections for one another, until they're found by a collection agency. Whitney draws the pursuers away, only to apparently be killed in the ensuing crash. Faye then learns that he's made her a beneficiary in his will, only to find that all she has inherited are his debts.

In the second act, it's revealed that the con artist Jet has apprehended is Whitney. As they prepare to hand him over, Faye becomes eager to question the man who betrayed her, to the point where she spirits him away in the Red Tail before the police can collect him.

The first half of this episode is taken up by the flashback, which is framed by Faye waiting for the ship's toilet to become vacant so she can clean out Ein's litter box. While waiting, she notices Ein's resemblance to Whitney and begins her story. It does provide the funniest moments in the episode, as Ein looks clearly uninterested by Faye's story from the beginning, and is asleep by the end. This is followed by Spike finishing in the toilet, having heard the whole story, and claiming it's "too long" and "needs editing".

The whole session is largely a day in the limelight for Faye, providing some answers to her past, but not everything. Even Spike doesn't believe the whole story, having been told something different in a previous session.

I do think it's a little bit too coincidental that Jet's bounty happens to be Whitney. Regardless, it's a touching episode which provides the most insight into Faye's character.

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